Writing Chain"If I could go back in time..."

<Introduction>
My chain writing is about if you go back in time, what would you do.In my writing, I wrote about if I could go back in time I would go and see dinosaurs.We did some pear edditing on my essay and I changed a little bit of grammar and deleted the informations that I don' need.Since this is chain writing, the writers didn't have the same idea, but I think it turned out alright.

<If I could go back in time>
If I could go back in time, I would go to when dinosaurs lived, because scientists have found alot of fossils and bonmes of dinosaurs,but they have never had a chance to see actual dinosaurs. It would be great to be the first one to see a real live dinosaur. It would be so awsome to to tell my friends and families that I saw dinosaurs.Maybe they won't belive me, but I can just belive in myself.
  If I really see the dinosaurs, I would take a camera, and take pictures of dinosaurs.I would like to be chased by dinosaurs, because it would be fun and thrilling. And maybe I can catch the little dinosaurs that has no parents, because if they don't have parents, you can just eat the little dinosaurs. And I will be the first one to eat dinosaur meat. To eat the dinosaur meat, I will need fire. So I'm going to take a lighter with me.
 Also, there are thousands of unknown dinosaurs. So I want to find out what kind of dinosaurs live there. And I also want to figure outb how dinosaurs got extinct, because no one has found out how, but I think I would have to leave to my time before I get hurt by something.

 When I come back, I sould write all about dinosaurs for my decendents. They will belive it because I'm their ancestor, right? The note I write will be an heirloom, and it will contain how the dinosaur meat tasted. If someone belives me, I'll be the most famous person in the world! Ha~ha~ Oh! I'll take some of the pictures to my friends, and if their reaction is good, I'll publish a book about dinosaurs, too. I want to let the world know all about dinosaurs!